Bee stings
like the sun’s rays
piercing through fresh cut wounds
waiting for the right time to heal.
Heal me.
Beware of Bees
30
Oct
Bee stings
like the sun’s rays
piercing through fresh cut wounds
waiting for the right time to heal.
Heal me.
Tying together all of life's key elements through the lives of many, one narrative at a time.
FASHION | FAITH | STYLE
Stop. Think. Open your mind. Oh, the places you'll go.
I'd like to say, pieces that resonate but I'd be stealing Falz's 'Stories that touch' line. :)
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NaijaBoy
December 16, 2012 at 11:07 am
You could have done more with the last line
memkoh
December 17, 2012 at 12:06 am
I agree, it was a very lazy last line. Since it’s a cinquain, the last line should have 2 syllables. What you do suggest?